Check out this copy critique for the Basketball Yoga Blast order page I created. I include my take on the headline and call to action.
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Check out this copy critique for the Basketball Yoga Blast landing page I created last year. I include my take on the headline, lead, body copy, and call to action.
Good work on your letter, Juan! You’re getting the structure of a sales letter down. Your writing style is pleasant to read and conversational. You’re incorporating some benefits into your letter, which helps make it more compelling to the reader.
“You couldn’t meet a better dude. +Juan Israel Ortiz ‘s a digital media content specialist (that means he’ll help you rock your content across the digital landscape) and he rocks at what he does.”
“Second VFX recruiter that reaches out to me in two days! Thanks Juancho for the pointers!!!!”